This is the beginning to my novel, feedback would be great. Thank you!?

That was wondeful! I want to read more!!! No, not cliche, but (in a sense) reminded me of Twilight... Heres why: the whole do trust me thing in the car and then she winds up in a hospital.... that was the only CON, but here r the PROS: Its an atomatic hooker... it doesnt take its time in leeving u hanging.... Im interested in the whole suicide thing, and the invisible thing (possibly like Mia in the Princess diaries?) is not cliche, its wat life is reelly like.... OMG!!! that guy sounds awesome.... is he dark? like edward scissorhands??? cz that wd be awesome!!! lol... ok well good lck and keep me posted;)